CreativeFreak

:thud: Hey there! I really liked this. It choked me. Seriously, I almost cried, not kidding. Very, very good!! Hope you will keep writing more, you're so good at it! ...

This was extremely good! I liked it a lot, all the metaphors make it interesting and pulls me more into it, but I think more explanation should be added on. ...

Aw! Hey there! I loved this poem!! It was so cute and honest. I think you should add some more stuff about the war itself, ya know, stuff like, bombings ...

Hey, there! CreativeFreak, here to help you out!! :D Not that bad, I don't really like prologues, but this was okay. A couple nitpicks: My eyes scanned the continous rows ...

Haha, hey there! :D This was very cute, you certainly got a laugh out of me a couple times! :lol: Although it was cute and funny, there were still some ...

Hey there! Creative Freak in the house yo! :lol: Just kidding, I don't really talk like that, L.o.l. Anyway! This is an extremely good poem! I love it and could ...

This is really good. I don't know what kind of song this would be, as in genre, what are you planning, but good luck with it. I think if this ...

This is a very good poem, but your punctuation isn't helping it out at all. The color of an enchanting rose , whose petals conceal razor sharp thorns The color ...

Hello! The fact that this was a true story creeps me out, and hope this "Fake Girl" isn't you, except for the end of course! :lol: I only found a ...

Oh my gosh, I love the ending, about your thoughts becoming reality! It makes me feel like there are many more people that feel the same way about what I ...

I really like this story. Very well written and very intertaining. I only found one nitpick that showed out of the crowd: And yes, it was Elina, looking lovely as ...

Hey-oo! Um, I think this is written good, and it is interesting, but you only have a cuople more nitpicks KJ didn't point out. He wasnt ready to leave us. ...

Okay, i don't think there were anyproblems with this. It was very well written, and i like it. I hated getting to the end 'cause i wanted to read more!! ...

Hey there! I like the beginning of this. It caught my attention and kept me going. But i did find a couple nitpiks: “I’m not doing this.” I whispered, faced ...

This is extremly good! I only have one nitpik that caught my eye though: Or maybe that early morning where you and Riley and you stayed up all night and ...