CreativeFreak

Hi, Crimsona! :) I love this poem! It's so cute and funny. The rhyming is very clever, heehee. The thoughts and feelings you put into it were so fitting as ...

Hi, Kuhleri. :) Really cute poem. Surprising at some point ("It's not even about the ones who love you."), and the end were some true, deep, original words. Good job, ...

Hi, superchipmunk. Nice name. :) I read that book too. Really cool. I didn't exactly get what your were trying to say. I think it was the repetition of "Never ...

Hi there, Galerius. :) I like this poem, and thankfully I read Life of Pi , because I believe that book gave me a better understanding about what you were ...

Hey, Litehawk. :) Good job giving the moon a personality and even feelings/morals. This is such a cool poem. I couldn't find anything really wrong with it, so that's cool. ...

Hey, there, Hibiscus. Nice poem. Really nice. The first stanza starts off catching you; getting you (the reader) hooked, so that's awesome, and you have some really nice metaphors that ...

Hey, there! Good work here. :) I'm Freak. I really like how you did extremely good descriptions, they were amazing. The ending was really awesome and, again, the descriptions were ...

Hi, charmcaster. I'm Freak. :) I'd first like to start off by telling you that this is a good poem and very easy to relate to. :D Nitpicks : You ...

Hi, RedRaven. I'm Freak. :) So I like this whole story line...er, plot. It's so different and inexpressibly interesting. That first part was a little confusing, I don't know if ...

Hey Big_Cheesy_Grin, I'm Freak. :) I thought this was a good start; it has lots of potential and could be so much better. So, first I'll start off with telling ...

Hey Captian. I'm Freak, as you can see. :D I like this poem, very easy to relate to, but I got annoyed after the first two lines. This is just ...

Hi, I'm Freak. :) I kind of like this poem. It has it's good points and its...really silly points. I'm not sure if you just put together a whole bunch ...

Hi, I'm Freak. :) I really like this poem. It's is fairly realistic and easy to relate to. Good beginning that grasps the readers attention pretty much automatically. Nitpicks: To ...

Hi, I'm Freak. :) I really like this poem, but it is really unorganized. It's cute and whatnot, but you need a lot of help with your punctuation and grammar. ...

Hi, I'm Freak! :) I really liked this poem and I found only one thing wrong with it: To protect their fellow man I feel that the word "Man" should ...