CrazyGirl

It's too short really and poems can't be written like that. I didn't undersatnd it and I think you should work a little bit harder on this it could turn ...

1. Space between paragraphs please. 2. When someone speak you put the dialogue in another line seperated form the paragraph. 3. You have some mistakes I think you should re-read ...

You have a lot of mistakes you should edit it and re-poste it and maybe make a better version of this. There is something I didn't understand if they didn't ...

Wow girl you have some really negative thoughts. Who cares if you got a date on Valentine's day, all you need is friends who love you for who you really ...

I loved it. It wasn't boring at all, it was interesting and kept me on edge to what's going to happen. And I would love to know what will happen ...

I like it and I like the twist in the end but I think you should add some more details and description to it. For example I'd like to know ...

A very beautiful story here. It brought tears to my eyes. I think you did a really great job by capturing their friendship but I'd loved it if you added ...

A really good job you did here especially when writing about a psych-path believe me it is not easy. Also good job about the surprise in the end, I think ...

cute and fluffy story :) is there a sequel ?? I'm dying to know what will happen when they meet.