Crayon

that cracked me up, reminded me of a really bad really old joke my friend told me. "did you hear that santa's quit? but dont worry, micheal jacksons said he'll ...

:cry: So Sad! i really could image somebody crying over love letters...watching shooting stars! its really great and im sure everybody can relate to it! So apart from the fact ...

wow i really loved this work so much, its really easy to relate to for everybody i guess but it really touches me as my best friend just turned on ...

Wow that was great, i was captivated! I honestly couldn't find anything wrong with it, the transition from one person to the other was simple and if there are any ...

Wow, that was really great. I loved it all - completly and if theres any grammatical mistakes i can't help you there 'cause i'm utterly hopless :oops:

Wow. thats an extreamly powerful peice. Almost set us off crying (by us i mean myself and 2 other hostel girls who i am currently sharing the computer room with) ...

Wow....thats all i can say...I'm in the middle of a class and my teachers watching what i'm reading so i kinda had to run through it pretty quick buts still ...

It um... was cute... but really it lacked emotion, it was sweet though... :D The truth is far from in her grasp The more she digs into her past. for ...

I Think this is a good framework, it does need more detail though, in places like Jane wakes up in her small bedroom, shuts her alarm off, gets dressed, combs ...

I liked this peice as much as i can like something thats action/ adventure. I had one problem with the story, just something little but its in the beginning so ...

Great framework but it really needs 'filling out' if its worked right it could be a great novel. Your kow how people say nothing can ever get more worse from ...

I really do love this poem, I think it describes everybody in some way or another and that anybody who reads this can relate to it, everybody has had somebody ...

I really liked the general idea its just a little hard to get them imagary, show don't tell, my english teacher is always quoting that. [/quote]she sang like there were ...

I really like this peice, its a good change from the things i normal write, nothing really i can say to change about it. Just keep doing what your doing, ...

I really loved this piece, it leaves you thinking. I would also love to say something to help you improve it but there is nothing I can say apart from ...