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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: What Am I?

    Hello, hello! I am here to review. So, I get this, much of this anyways. I can't stand labels either, unless they help me to process something about myself or ...

    Jun 27, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I'm Not Right

    Ok, who do I have to f*cking deck? WHO HURT YOU?! : ( I feel so bad nitpicking this but alas, I must review. I wanna try and surpass Harry's ...

    Jun 27, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreamer | A Poem

    Hello, hello! Ok, before I begin. I really really love your profile picture! It's so cute, reminds me of Tortoro! Anyways, back to the review! The first line doesn't seem ...

    Jun 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 3

    OK, LETS GO LAST ONE I CAN DO THIS! To start, try not to repeat words too much! You seem to repeat damn a lot at the start, so just ...

    Jun 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 2

    Alrighty, this is a long one... Ok, I took an ice cream break. Chocolate ice cream but make it moose tracks! Anyways, review time! I am loving this chapter title! ...

    Jun 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 1

    Hello, hello! I am here to review! I have a handful of time on me, so I'll be reviewing all of the chapters you have up so far! Yay! I ...

    Jun 26, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Lost Things

    Hello, hello! I'm here to review! I do like the pictures you've used! They fit well, that's for sure. The third line of the poem is among my favorite, mostly ...

    Jun 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: oh, love

    Hello hello! I’m reviewing from my phone so bear with me! : ) So, somewhat short yes also long, this poem makes me SAD. Why? The words used and the ...

    Jun 25, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tenement Lullaby

    Hello, hello! I am here to review. First stanza; beautiful, simple, and very relatable. After turning off phones and computers, things can be seen in the dark but it's time ...

    Jun 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: The Wise Man of Haikus

    Hello, hello! I'm here to review! The title did catch my eye, so good on you for that! My first issue, is that, by the fourth line, the flow of ...

    Jun 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: Messy depths of murky words

    Hello, hello! Cow here for a review! So, I'm willing to bet this poem is about writing. That is pretty easy to guess! I don't really have much to critique ...

    Jun 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: What Some People Say

    Hello, hello! A heads-up, I won't be giving criticism, this is purely me telling you what I thought about it, and just giving my thoughts. This kind of work, be ...

    Jun 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Court Jester and the Baker Boy

    Hello, hello! I'm here to review. Firstly, loving the title. Giving me some Skyrim vibes, for some strange reason. But hey, I'm not complaining! I love that game... Anyways! The ...

    Jun 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: new moon

    The format is confusing to look at first but then it's really cool! So, the poem. Wonderful. I like how, depending on the phase it corresponds to your mood or ...

    Jun 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Rivers and Being Known

    Howdy! I'm here to review, and am rather intrigued by what you have here! Short stories are always intriguing. I have a boyfriend, almost three years in August. Things just ...

    Jun 22, 2020


You know that place between sleep and awake, that place where you still remember dreaming? That’s where I’ll always love you. That’s where I’ll be waiting.
— J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan