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Re: What Am I?
Hello, hello! I am here to review. So, I get this, much of this anyways. I can't stand labels either, unless they help me to process something about myself or ...
Jun 27, 2020 -
Re: I'm Not Right
Ok, who do I have to f*cking deck? WHO HURT YOU?! : ( I feel so bad nitpicking this but alas, I must review. I wanna try and surpass Harry's ...
Jun 27, 2020 -
Re: Dreamer | A Poem
Hello, hello! Ok, before I begin. I really really love your profile picture! It's so cute, reminds me of Tortoro! Anyways, back to the review! The first line doesn't seem ...
Jun 27, 2020 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 3
OK, LETS GO LAST ONE I CAN DO THIS! To start, try not to repeat words too much! You seem to repeat damn a lot at the start, so just ...
Jun 27, 2020 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 2
Alrighty, this is a long one... Ok, I took an ice cream break. Chocolate ice cream but make it moose tracks! Anyways, review time! I am loving this chapter title! ...
Jun 27, 2020 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 1
Hello, hello! I am here to review! I have a handful of time on me, so I'll be reviewing all of the chapters you have up so far! Yay! I ...
Jun 26, 2020 -
Re: Lost Things
Hello, hello! I'm here to review! I do like the pictures you've used! They fit well, that's for sure. The third line of the poem is among my favorite, mostly ...
Jun 26, 2020 -
Re: oh, love
Hello hello! I’m reviewing from my phone so bear with me! : ) So, somewhat short yes also long, this poem makes me SAD. Why? The words used and the ...
Jun 25, 2020 -
Re: Tenement Lullaby
Hello, hello! I am here to review. First stanza; beautiful, simple, and very relatable. After turning off phones and computers, things can be seen in the dark but it's time ...
Jun 25, 2020 -
Re: The Wise Man of Haikus
Hello, hello! I'm here to review! The title did catch my eye, so good on you for that! My first issue, is that, by the fourth line, the flow of ...
Jun 25, 2020 -
Re: Messy depths of murky words
Hello, hello! Cow here for a review! So, I'm willing to bet this poem is about writing. That is pretty easy to guess! I don't really have much to critique ...
Jun 24, 2020 -
Re: What Some People Say
Hello, hello! A heads-up, I won't be giving criticism, this is purely me telling you what I thought about it, and just giving my thoughts. This kind of work, be ...
Jun 23, 2020 -
Re: The Court Jester and the Baker Boy
Hello, hello! I'm here to review. Firstly, loving the title. Giving me some Skyrim vibes, for some strange reason. But hey, I'm not complaining! I love that game... Anyways! The ...
Jun 22, 2020 -
Re: new moon
The format is confusing to look at first but then it's really cool! So, the poem. Wonderful. I like how, depending on the phase it corresponds to your mood or ...
Jun 22, 2020 -
Re: Rivers and Being Known
Howdy! I'm here to review, and am rather intrigued by what you have here! Short stories are always intriguing. I have a boyfriend, almost three years in August. Things just ...
Jun 22, 2020
