Cow

Hello, hello! Cow here! I'm loving the first line, the way you compare the waves to sheets or the sheets to waves, honestly either one works! It's wonderful imagery and ...

Cow here! Hello, hello! That was backward but hey, let's keep moving on. I don't really know what to say? It was very good, the description and such. I could ...

I'm so sorry. Thats... god. its just makes me want to give you a nice, long comforting hug to be honest. if you like hugs of course! I know some ...

Hello, hello! I am here to review, so let's get started, shall we?\ From what I can tell, dialogue once again I believe. Try reading your dialogue out loud to ...

Hello, hello! I am here to review. So, let's get started... Overall, it was pretty good! Some lines, like " It wasn't until Billy tip-toed to a stop that she ...

Hello, hello! I am here to review, yes I am. So, from what I can tell, I think my biggest issues was dialogue. It didn't seem to flow very well, ...

Hello, hello! I am here to review! So, from what I can tell, grammar is fine. Some lines like “yes.” She responded, her voice like velvet. “However I am afraid ...

Hello, hello! I am here to review! From what I can tell, there's a lot that needs work but you do seem to have this simplistic style, which I like ...

Hello, hello! I am here to review! So, from what I can tell, when a character is thinking, try to make sure the reader knows either who is thinking what ...

Hello, hello! I am here to review! I really like the title! It reminds of some ancient god, stepping through the skies, looking down up the earth with a gaze ...

Hello, hello! I am here to review! So, I'm guessing this is you describing either one of many of these things - depression, anxiety, or sensory overload. If so, I ...

Hello, hello! I am here to review! First off, I am loving the title. Intriguing, to say the least. Fitting, since its poetry! The first and second stanzas - the ...

Hello, hello! I'm here to review! First and second stanza - loving them. The smilies, the imagery, ALL of it! Just... wonderful. It can see the lady's feet, the description ...

OK WELL DUDE GAL NON-BINARY PAL IM JUST GONNA OH MY GOD IM GONNA CRY THE ENDING. THE. ENDING. UGHHHHH. I'm sorry, just, ugh. Such a wonderful story. The ending ...

Ok, ok, ok, Grav. I'm trying my best to not, like, scream because who hurt you? Yourself? I would hug you if you consented to it, I would do it ...