Cotton

Hiya! I really love your style of writing, it's really easy to read and follow so thumbs-up on that! Your characters are pretty cool as well, and I liked the ...

Hey! After reading this, I'm not entirely sure if Fantasy Fiction is the best place for it, as it does not really seem to fit into this genre. However, if ...

Hey! On a first note, this wasn't too long at all! It was just right. Perfect. Which, incidentally, is a very good word to use to describe your piece. Perfect. ...

Hey! This was really interesting, mostly because your main character is a little girl. Most things I've read on here (and from my own experience) are written about teens or ...

Hey! I thought these two little chapters were really cute - and not too long, which is also very nice! There is nothing more off-putting than an endless post! Right, ...

Hey! I really enjoyed reading this. I'm not entirely sure why, and it's great that I'm so helpful, but there was something about your writing that was compelling. An awesome ...

Hey! I really loved this. It was short (always a good thing for a first part - there is nothing more offputting than a never-ending piece of writing!) but extremely ...

Hey Lethero! I really enjoyed reading this, and not just because it was a nice readable length! Thanks for not making it too long :D lol. There are just a ...

Heya! This is nice! And not the "nice" which is bland and boring, the "nice" where you say "niiiiiiicce!!" and draw it out, like "aaaahohaawweeesome"!! I loved it! The atmosphere ...

Hi! This is the first piece of science fiction I've reciewed on YWS, so sorry if I'm a little... vague in this lol. First of all, I think your writing ...

Hi! I agree with what has already been said (sorry to repeat) but you want to make it longer/elaborate. Apart from that, it seems really intriguing (and anyway, I love ...

Hi! I really enjoyed reading this. I think the idea is really fantastic - and even though the idea of people with wings is not entirely original on its own, ...

Wow! What a cliffhanger! I'm itching for more! It's like the weird monster person in the padded room can read minds! Fantastic. Just a couple of things: --> Firstly, I ...

My word, Bex! This is fantastic! You got the almost old-fashioned, oldy-worldy tone exactly right, with the little bit of dialogue clearly showing the different characters' characters (haha lol). Yeah

Hi! I only recently started to become interested in vampire stories, so I don't have much experience in this field, but I love the way you have the vampire as ...