CotardDelusionz

I've been reading your works and I love all of them. I like how you convey your view of the world and the things you've experienced as they are to ...

Nice short story! I feel like this would be great as a continuing story to answer the questions that this story leaves us unless it is your intention for the ...

Wow this a literally amazing I was blown away by the ending. I really wasn't expecting it because you did a great job at not giving away the meaning and ...

interesting poem although I don't agree with it's beliefs it's still a nice little poem. Everyone has different views and it's always interesting to see how people view things because ...

Cool poem I love the word play used throughout that justifies the title "Around the World". You use word play and figurative language very well in this to show how ...

Nice introduction to a series there's nothing much to critique for my personal standards this is good writing to me. Only things I suggest making this part more clear for ...

Very inspiring poem what this poem talks about is something I really struggle with, a feeling of loss and a chaotic or sad self image, the "sense of self". The ...

Woah a very interesting and intriguing piece. Lot's of symbolism and dept to this. I can tell this is a tragedy theme of writing that's supposed to expose the readers ...

Nice I honesty really liked this and it's not often that I find a story with lots of dialogue that I actually decide to read to the end. This means ...

Nice story and good timing since Christmas is approaching. Short story but pretty and meaningful. I'm not much of a critic so I don't have much to say about this ...

I'm not much of a critic and the writing is overall pretty good but I noticed a grammar error here, "All was normal, her dance teacher was recording us dance ...

Wow a great start to a horror/fantasy story I was pretty hooked. I'm not really a writer so I don't have anything to critique but everything seems good to me ...

Nice poem, everything seems well constructed to me I don't have anything to critique. A easy to read poem that brings fear of judgement to light, and how one will ...

This is a very deep and painful poem of what I interpret to be abuse. You were about to express the horror of this topic well in this poem which ...

Nice poem you give a great feeling of lost through this poem to the readers. It's simple yet impactful.