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Well, I was, indeed, trying to tell the reader of what the two spells did. I do see your point but what other way would there be since I'd need ...

Yeah, pretty much everything you asked is shown in previous chapters. As for Hilda's knowledge, I figured I needed SOMEONE to know less in order to have an excuse to ...

Eeergh, that's not the emoji I expected that to be...

Vanessa was never mysterious! :x She was always super nice and friendly but that was because they were in Valarheim. You don't live long enough to be a general if ...

As sweet as Vanessa can be, she wants the kids to learn self-reliance as they won't have a general present for every mission. What if they had run into something ...

Ah, well, then it's best to make clear that up, too! Maybe find a way to describe Kolfer's appearance in the next chapter?

Oh, and there are other Scions taking part in this - they're just with Ragnar and Alexandra's teams!

Hilda doesn't study much technical stuff - mostly it's spells - and spends her time training, usually. I figured this was the better way to expose details instead of having ...

Heh, I didn't know you were Welsh yourself. If I ever have Owen say something complicated in Welsh, I'll run it by you first! Scions DO get time off at ...

Oh, yeah, I've made additions to the other chapters as well.

Oh, I forgot to include Fred in that list. He'll also have his part to play later! The others aren't as significant but they are still around, so I didn't ...

Thanks for the pat on the back, Skins. I'm glad you saw no problem with the grammar and whatnot because I combed through every other chapter to check for wrong ...

Thanks for the kind words. This story is actually already up to chapter 10, mind! I had to post a new version of this as, over the past few days, ...

I noticed the she/it thing during the weekend, actually, but didn't get around to fixing it as I was working on something else. I'll work on it and on what ...

Alright, I see some of your points. I've changed the "not happy" paragraph into this to add meat to it: Hilda's unhappiness manifests in a deep frown that stretches across ...