Cosmo

As before, it was in a stanzaic form before. And you can see the rhythme better when it is in that form.

Crap, it was in a sonnet form when I put it in! Wait a moment...

This was literally an experiment to see what I could make using the same words in a different pattern. I put it on here to see if anyone could make ...

Hi there! thanks for the review! What I'm trying to do here is as Belle said, I'm creating my own style of poetry and structure. And I'm trying to say ...

What it is a basic explanation of human nature in the simplest form. So when I say "anticipate", I mean everything. Its a poem to be pondered upon, as it ...

Thanks! and Treasure Planet is my favorite film :D It was intended to be a cross between a short story and poem, more to the poem side though. I am ...

Thanks! I'll try working on that.

Thanks! I've actually finished exams now and have a 2 week holiday before the next term. Now its time to get motivated for the gym and BaGua! and I've made ...

Thanks! that was the intention of the poem, for it to be relatable, so good to know it worked! And I've made the corrections.

Thanks so much! I have a Short Film Script I'll be posting soon and I've been told by the few that's seen it it's really something, I'll keep you updated! ...

No you are not ;) This is one of the faults of the riddle, is that it can be multiple things :S But thank you for the review!

Thank you! :)

Thank you!! :D

If you read my previous comments to the other reviews you can see why I made the behaviour of the Hummingbird different from all the others. The choice of language ...

I think the childs point of view was part of the narrative of the protagonist, to help empathise with the character to when you were that age. That's why there ...