Cornelius_Quinnsomer

Yes, you're right. I completely forgot about this until now. I did some of the speech marks where they need to be. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. How did ...

I'm glad you liked it, you seem to be the only one who's had anything to say about it. I kind of am writing a novel sized something-or-other, and I ...

Yes, well, when I saw I inspired someone to write, a sense of joy came over me.

eh, I found it insipid and a regurgitation of every other poem ever written. A dull watered-down rendition of my poem. Too long, diluted, and usual.

I could see this as a spoken word piece, if the right silences were added. But if not, then I agree with the posts written before me.

I'm taking your squirming as a compliment.

Thank you all for reading. Firstly Kylan, Why would you read a poem about anything? The poem was clearly about my musical endeavers being compared to sex. You made the ...

This peice is finished and isn't that great and can't really ever be. Write something new now.

Thank you for responding, and hello to you too. Your profile is very impressive. (Questions)-- Though, what do you mean by machine gun lines? Got it the first time? In ...

The second stanza is very TOOL (...Lateralus)-esque. All in all, the emotion definitely goes deep. The ending is great.

I like this. Very real, though some parts a little cliche', but still (touching on/ somewhat) raw and very real. I can feel it.

thank you. Greek--- Dionysus: God of Wine Eros: God of love, lust Eluetherios:The liberator, Dionysus and Eros were both referred to as; responsible for freeing one from one's normal self, ...

I suppose an example of awkwardly perfect would be Johhny Depp in Pirates of the Carribean.

haha.... I really think this is great. The idea and the writing. Good job.