Corncob

At first, I thought this was gonna be one of those warning poems that are all dramatic like: OMIGAWD, DA WORLD BE ENDING AND FIREBALLS BE RAINING AND KIDS BE ...

Hey Strange, I probably will only nitpick grammar things in this review, because I'm not sure what your references mean. BUT, that will not stop me from trying my best ...

So obviously, very personal to you. I know sometimes it's hard to change personal poems because they mean so much to a person, but I have a few nitpicks that ...

Hey, Strange! Here for a review on this quirky, hilarious piece of work :D! Good points: Very funny Nice title 2nd and 4th line rhyme Rhythm Nitpicks: The first and ...

Oh, wow! I love it, I love it, I love it! It's beautiful, great vocabulary, and has enough emotion in it to be a good poem. It might be a ...

Hey Strange. +1 here to review as honestly as I can! I don't know if it's just me not reading into this poem enough, but I felt like by the ...

I love it! I think it's even better than the first chapter, which was excellent as well. Nitpicks... This section was a bit confusing: Half of a year, and I ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm pretty new myself, but you're even newer; today! :D Okay, now to the actual stuff. Nitpicks-- This is a poem, for sure, but it also very ...

Wow. *Takes deep breath.* *Must not cry. No. Will not cry.* BWAAAAAAAAAH! Okay, so let me start with the nitpicks first so I can just GET THIS OVER WITH AND ...

This was beautiful! The beginning had excellent rhyming, and honestly, I think without stanzas, it is better, if not a bit loose. The rhyming was good, especially when you said, ...

Omigod, all I have to say is: I LOVE IT SO MUCH! Writer's block has become a rather cliche thing to write about, if I do say so myself, but ...

Wow, this was great. I don't know if the second stanza is necessary, but then the poem might be too short. I like the first 2 lines of the second ...

I am so glad you wrote this poem! I have read and heard about people from the army returning and being greeted by horrible things, especially from so-called 'peaceful messages' ...

Wow, I would just write like 3 sentences, but I want to get points for a review :D. If this were just a comment, here is what I would write: ...

wow, i thought this would be hard to decipher, but there is only a layer or two before the literal meaning on most lines! the beginning captured my attention right ...