ConverseFireGirl

Hey there, NerdBird! :D I really, really enjoyed this, I found it suspenseful, and very intriguing! Your character is both strong and relatable. I mean, obviously none of us could ...

This is such a good piece. I like how you almost made it poetic. Very nice. I have to agree with you on the neknomination front. I think it's pretty ...

Hey there! I totally loved reading this, you held my attention really well, good job! This deserves to be on the Spotlight for sure, I love how you wrote this ...

Hey there, this is a veeeerrry nice piece of writing indeed, great job! I love the words that you use, like the "tick. tock" on the separate lines really makes ...

Hey there, 221! This is a very interesting piece of work to read, it totally makes the reader think! Good work! Kudos! There's a few little mistakes which are easy ...

This is an amazing piece of poetry, Cheetah! I p personally love haikus, writing and reading t hem and this has been really great to reaed. I have to agree ...

Hey there, Strange! This is an incredibly short, and powerful poem and I like it. A lot. I personally like the use of the semi-colon after your second line, as ...

Hey there, Ugnee! Welcome to YWS, it's just great here! :D Right! Onto the review. So, this is an extremely intriguing prologue and I actually cannot wait to read more ...

Hey there! I have to say, this Chapter was just as great as your first. Great work, and I hope this review will help! :D First of all, "Rebekkah" what ...

Oh my- what. *sobs* This was such a beautiful piece, seriously. When I was reading it, I was just thinking of Finnick and Annie and their son and everything ever ...

Hey there, Converse here for a review. First of all, I apologise, but I don't quite get the meaning of this piece of writing. I'd suggest you add more of ...

Hey there, Kanome! :D Firstly, I just want to say how great this is, good job! :D This was almost lyrical, with the repeating of three words and "every night" ...

Hey there, Fiend! (heh.) I totally love this poem, really, I do. It was very realistic and I especially enjoyed how your rhythm worked, the rhyming was great too, not ...

Hey there! Can I just say now that I have nothing to improve on at all. Nothing. This story was actually amazing, once I started I couldn't stop reading and ...

Veery nice poem! :D I particularly like the lines: "happiness deep as an ocean feels as if it might just pour over" That was very nice! :D Another thing I ...