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Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 1: Enemies We Were, What Are We Now?
Aww thanks!
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 4: Darkness
Thank you for the AWESOME review @ThereseCricket! Honestly! I never thought about the five senses. I always just felt like something was missing... Stupid me. Anyway, I'll work on it. ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 4: Darkness
Thank you for the AWESOME review @ThereseCricket! Honestly! I never thought about the five senses. I always just felt like something was missing... Stupid me. Anyway, I'll work on it. ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 3:The Twins
Hey, It's not the same day. and they are talking about the same thing...guess its not that bad. And the me lady thing is sort of like a dialect... if ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 3:The Twins
Thank you for the wonderful review and suggestions @Birkhoff! I will keep these in mind and try to improve. Thanks a bunch for taking your time and reading this. By ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 17: Asteria's Lock-In 1.1
I'm sorry if i sounded morning grogginess ugh!
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Anime is my addiction, my legal drug.
Oh God! You're not the only one Kanome!
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 15: Juno's Lock-In 1.1
Oh I see. Its sorta of like how we say "dunno" instead of "don't know" eh? Okay, fine by me. Actually it just makes her that much of a real ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: Meet the Cast of Things Fall Apart (Edited!)
Uh... do I really have to say something cause I am speechless.... in a good way...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 3:The Twins
thanks for the review I dont know about rudolf honestly I'm thinking of revamping this chapter completely Any way, I'll let u guys know what ever I do
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 13: Fredrian
Its been a pleasure, Your Highness
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 3:The Twins
It was awsome! I really enjoyed reading your review. Thanks a lot! And this is sort of the first time that someone found a big problem in my writing. @RoyalHighhness ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 3:The Twins
Thanks alot Royal! And yeah I have got something up my sleeve for the upcoming chapter ;) and thanks for all the advice. This was meant to be from third ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Cursed world: Chapter two (II)
anything to help you out man!
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: Cursed world: Chapter two (I)
HEY DN'T MENTION IT
Jun 10, 2014
