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  • The sound of something new.

    Hey there! I'm pretty new to this forum but her we go! The way that it sings is like a ripple through the world. A wave that can’t be stopped ...

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  • The beginning of the story

    Far-fetched. We all knew it! Never doubted that the man would fail. Well, until he showed up and changed his ways. Once again, I was surprised, but he ready to ...

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  • A Lone soul

    Katharine rolled down the window. She herself was cold for the air condition was blowing in full force, yet she had cold sweat running down the side of her face. ...

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  • A lone soul Chapter two

    Katherine slept that night, but she received no energy. Her dreams were filled with her dreadful past and of the owner of the motels disturbing grin. The grin wouldn’t have ...

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  • Warhammer 40k New story

    That day beamed bright and cold. The heat of sun seemed to do little to nourish the cold, torn earth. Nor did the sun warm are lone squad. I could ...

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  • One to Midnight

    “Your turn.” I handed the controller reluctantly to my idle friend. He was still grinning from my mediocre game. “What! You got something to say,” I retorted. He just sat ...

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  • One to Midnight Chapter Two

    Im sick today, so this one might not be quite as good as the first post. All i think it needs now is some editing! Thanks guys! “Markus! Get your ...

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  • One to Midnight chapter 3

    I took another look into my friend’s eyes. This time much deeper then I ever had. I could see one thing that scratched the surface of his conciseness. It was ...

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  • Worthy of Love

    Sorry its so long! I tryed to space it more, it used to be a couple of paragraphs. It may not be that well writen, i'm not sure. But what ...

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  • The Color Blue

    That night I lay asleep in my room, waiting. I didn’t like the way I felt right now. I couldn’t really tell what was different about his night. I just ...

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  • The Color Blue Chapter two

    I wasn’t sure why I was running. Perhaps it was my lack of knowledge, or the fact that my parents would soon be awakened by the noises, and find my ...

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  • The day that had not a morning.

    I could here the wind. A defining sound that shook me to my deepest core. I lay in my home, or what was left of my home, and waited. I ...

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  • The Color Blue Chapter 3

    Of course I wasn’t sure what the word weapon meant at first. It would take months of hardship before that word would appear in my vocabulary. Even though I couldn’t ...

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  • Lone Soul Chapter 2: part two

    As she realized that it was the exact room she had slept in the night before she let out a sigh of discontentment. After the third time Katharine once again ...

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  • Lone Soul Chapter 4

    After the manager stopped smiling he began to talk. “Well, since you are going to be here awhile I guess I should introduce you to the town folk. By the ...

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  • Worthy of Love

    Is there any typos or other mistakes? Just wondering! I cant pretend to understand what I’m doing. If it looks as if I don’t know where to walk next – ...

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  • War Never Changes (Start of short story?)

    Hey guys! Just wanted to know what you thought about the story below. Needs some work I suppose, but wanted to know if the concept is good. haha. Is it ...

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  • Radiated Dust

    Hey guys! Just wanted to know what you thought about the story below. Needs some work I suppose, but wanted to know if the concept is good. haha. Is it ...

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