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Re: Protectors of Gantaro: Chapter three
Hey! Another good chapter. I think you know how much I like your series so I won't waste your time drooling all over it xD! So most of the problems ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 3: Son of Aredes (P2)
Hey man! I'm finally back! So I was excited to read this chapter. I always was a fan of magic battles, and this one was no different. The first thing ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Protectors of Gantaro: Chapter Two
Hey there! At long last, the second chapter is here. It's an awesome surprise to see the other chapters here also. I will try to savor them all. So the ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Secret of The Emerald: Chapter 2
Alright. I want to start out by saying that this was very well written. Not many people have such a great writing quality about them. I have to admit, chapter ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 3: Son of Aredes
Alright! The first thing I noticed was the shorter chapter. God has heard my prayers! (looking at a screen too long is pretty taxing) To start with, the first sentence ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: One Day to Live
Hey there! I think that your story was pretty good. I really enjoyed the read. It was short, sweet, and worthy of second read through. (Which I totally did). So ...
May 30, 2015 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 2: War for Libson
Alright finished the second chapter. I wanted to give you my opinion on it while my thoughts were fresh. All and all, I liked it. I felt like I was ...
May 30, 2015 -
Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 1: Aftermath
Alright I read the first chapter without reading anything else. So take my words with a grain of salt. I liked the story. From the first paragraph to the last ...
May 28, 2015 -
Re: Old Lives - Prologue
Hey there! I want to start off by saying that there is a lot of mystery in this chapter. My favorite part was probably the beginning. I liked how you ...
May 28, 2015 -
Re: Protectors of Gantaro
I really did like this. It was pretty cool and I really do want to read the next chapter. The description was good, and the character was also cool. I'm ...
May 28, 2015 -
Re: Old Lives - Chapter 1
I like this. I want to tell you why. I was almost turned off by the story int he view of the cat, but then how you wrote his inner ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: The Dark Crystal Part 1
Hey! I've seen some of your reviews around so I thought I'd check out some of your stuff. You did not disappoint. First of, I liked how you have the ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: CID ~ Case1 : The Mystery of killer Pen
Hey there! I'm a fan of dialogue, so this script was a feast to my eyes. (They're called scripts right?) I thought that your dialogue was good. It's what stood ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Secret of The Emerald: Prologue
Hey there! This is my first review so I'll try my best. I just want to say that I liked it. By the time I realized it I was finished ...
May 26, 2015
