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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Protectors of Gantaro: Chapter three

    Hey! Another good chapter. I think you know how much I like your series so I won't waste your time drooling all over it xD! So most of the problems ...

    Jun 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 3: Son of Aredes (P2)

    Hey man! I'm finally back! So I was excited to read this chapter. I always was a fan of magic battles, and this one was no different. The first thing ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Protectors of Gantaro: Chapter Two

    Hey there! At long last, the second chapter is here. It's an awesome surprise to see the other chapters here also. I will try to savor them all. So the ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Secret of The Emerald: Chapter 2

    Alright. I want to start out by saying that this was very well written. Not many people have such a great writing quality about them. I have to admit, chapter ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 3: Son of Aredes

    Alright! The first thing I noticed was the shorter chapter. God has heard my prayers! (looking at a screen too long is pretty taxing) To start with, the first sentence ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: One Day to Live

    Hey there! I think that your story was pretty good. I really enjoyed the read. It was short, sweet, and worthy of second read through. (Which I totally did). So ...

    May 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 2: War for Libson

    Alright finished the second chapter. I wanted to give you my opinion on it while my thoughts were fresh. All and all, I liked it. I felt like I was ...

    May 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fathers of Power Chapter 1: Aftermath

    Alright I read the first chapter without reading anything else. So take my words with a grain of salt. I liked the story. From the first paragraph to the last ...

    May 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Old Lives - Prologue

    Hey there! I want to start off by saying that there is a lot of mystery in this chapter. My favorite part was probably the beginning. I liked how you ...

    May 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Literature Re: Protectors of Gantaro

    I really did like this. It was pretty cool and I really do want to read the next chapter. The description was good, and the character was also cool. I'm ...

    May 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Old Lives - Chapter 1

    I like this. I want to tell you why. I was almost turned off by the story int he view of the cat, but then how you wrote his inner ...

    May 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dark Crystal Part 1

    Hey! I've seen some of your reviews around so I thought I'd check out some of your stuff. You did not disappoint. First of, I liked how you have the ...

    May 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Theatre Re: CID ~ Case1 : The Mystery of killer Pen

    Hey there! I'm a fan of dialogue, so this script was a feast to my eyes. (They're called scripts right?) I thought that your dialogue was good. It's what stood ...

    May 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Secret of The Emerald: Prologue

    Hey there! This is my first review so I'll try my best. I just want to say that I liked it. By the time I realized it I was finished ...

    May 26, 2015


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