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Re: Embers of Emotions
This one has such strong emotion in it. I love that about it. "You scream into the night. The only reply is the echo of your plea, to make the ...
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Re: Escape
I love the title. It really makes me want to escape :) I love the idea of it and how you executed it. "Dream it See it Catch it Chase ...
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Re: Never Mind
This is a topic that hasn't been done much. You had me hooked from the first to the last word. I love how you describe the nouns. Every word took ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Identity Thief
Okay this is so cool. Its so mysterious and it left me wanting to read like a whole book on the character! I love how you weave the words together, ...
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Re: Vent
I love this one :) Its a bit long and but its really good. I liked how you used words in your poem that people don't usually use, its pretty ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Innocence
Sorry about the blank comment, my mouse was acting wierd. First of all I'd like to tell you that I love how you taked about Hitler dropping his weapons, that ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Black and Blue
Omgad I can totally relate to this. Unfortunately I know exactly what feel you're channeling :/ Its so emotional, I remember the pain like it was yesterday. This one made ...
May 16, 2013 -
Re: What the Night Knows
Wow I'm not even dating anyone and this almost made me guilty :P haha its brilliant. I love the last few lines. I was hooked from the first to the ...
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Re: The White Tree
This is the first note I read when I got on this site because the title grabbed my curiosity. I love your style of writing, its super unique. It sort ...
May 16, 2013
