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Citrus17

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Target Practice: Chapter Two

    Thanks!

    May 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Target Practice: Chapter Three

    Aww, you're an angel! Thank you!

    May 31, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: My Brother.

    Aww thank you honey, that means so much :)

    May 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Unanticipated

    Wow, such a strong and true poem. I love your wording and your flow is beautifully consistent. It's great!

    May 12, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: My Brother.

    Thanks for your advice and for commenting on my work :)

    May 11, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: My Brother.

    Aww that means a lot and I will take in all your advice :) thank you for reviewing my song :)

    May 11, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: My Brother.

    Aww thank you so much honey :)

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Wren

    No worries :)

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Girl Of Imagination

    Aww, that's okay, when read it aloud i pronounced it 'used' too :D It's when I read in my head I realized the little mistake.

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Girl Of Imagination

    lol no worries :) Its really good :)

    May 11, 2014
  • Other » Romantic, Realistic Re: Why? (spilling my heart out)

    You're welcome :)

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magpie

    You're welcome :)

    May 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Falling

    Beautiful. Your wording is straight and nicely chosen. You have some great lines in there. It was sweet and sad and hit me emotionally. You have lovely flow to your ...

    May 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magpie

    Aww! That is so clever! You have assembled this beautifully well and I love your wording again. You have such a way with describing things and with portraying them afterwards. ...

    May 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hiaku-like poem

    I like this a lot. It's short, simple and nicely written. A nice take on a Haiku poem :)

    May 9, 2014


The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time.
— Mark Twain