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Hey so I'm going to leave a comment- not a review- because I don't have any specific suggestions but I thought I'd try and help with a few general suggestions. ...

(I think this comment is a bit of an over reaction. Also, the author made some very valid points on the conventional misuse of the term OCD. This site is ...

check your texts please

American pronounce 'Gogh' as 'Go'. Brits say 'Gof'. The Dutch (Van Gogh was dutch if you didn't know) say 'Gokh'. We tend to stick to peoples' native pronunciations when it ...

A lot of views on poetry are based on opinion. herbgirl took the time to share her views in order to help the author improve their writing.

I understand your worry a fear and I am in no way trying to erase it. I'm simply commenting as a reminder that the Blue Lives Matter campign is, to ...

Hey Courtney- dropping by for a quick comment. Let me start by saying I'm white. I have no first hand experience with the fear our black community must face every ...

yungcamus this is how constructive reviews on YWS are supposed to look. She not only pointed out problems but she said why they were problems and how they were to ...

'Ello, it's cello! For this review, I'd like to focus on your rhyming. (I would like to mention that I'm writing on a phone in a moving car so my ...

'Ello, it's cello! For this review, I'd like to focus on your rhyming. (I would like to mention that I'm writing on a phone in a moving car so my ...

You're more than welcome!

I apologize if you felt that way but it's not my style to swaddle my feedback with compliments. I review to help authors see where they have room for improvement. ...

And you're very welcome!

I'm all for imagining 'what if' but I think you're logic is still out of place. Like I mentioned, if there were only homosexual cisgendered people left in the world, ...

(Also I'm trying to replace fate in stanza three but like super struggling so I think I might just like pick this poem into stanzas I like and keep them ...