ChocolateCello

Hey! Cello here! I really liked this. It had a lot of emotion, meaning, and it was easy for the reader to connect. I have a few minor suggestion, all ...

Hey! Cello here for a review! Let's jump right in- We were too shy to see at each other Okay, this may very well be a regional thing, but I've ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review. This was really cute, I enjoyed reading it. Suggestions though- If I want this poem to rhyme I'm running out of time. Some ...

Hey! Cello here with a promised review! Okay, I just got back from school and drama club so honestly, I'm a bit tired. I'll try my best though. This was ...

Hey! Cello here! I always feel bad writing reviews that are strictly praise- it doens't help the writer- but I thought maybe I'd point out WHY this was so good. ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here for a review! Okay, reading over the past reviews you seem to have had quite a few people deeply cover content so I'm gonna keep this short, ...

ChocolateCello here! Gonna keep this review short and sweet- getting butterflies that shoot into the sky, Not sure if this makes sense. Sure, I get the whole nervous butterfly thing ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here for a review! I really liked this work. It beautifully told a great story. A few suggestions though- The Battle has begun. Unless this war is names ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! I know, I know, you wrote this in 2013, but I'm going to review it anyway. Okay, I feel like the words here are a bit... scrambled. ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Happy review day! I really enjoyed your other poem so I decided to check this one out. You have an amazing way at developing characters. I can't ...

Hey! Cello here! Wow liker seriously wow Okay, this was greta for quite a few reasons Language- You used amazing language. All the words felt so comfortable, perfect, and every ...

Hey! Cello here! I rarely review without editing but- This was amazing. There isn't anything to edit. I know, I know, reviews like this aren't helpful, I'm just saying 'yup, ...

Hey! Cello here! Happy review day! Okay, so I've been attacking almost every poet with a rant about punctuation. Okay, maybe 'attacking' isn't the word, but if anyone had been ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! Happy review day! Okay, I know this assignment was due and turned in long ago but it's always good to improve. I honestly ...

Hey! Cello here! So I rarely review works older than a month, for the author tends to be done editing by that point, but it's review day so why not. ...