ChocolateCello

Hey! Cello here! You did an amazing job putting emotion into words. It's a bit of sass, a bit of sadness, and it all ties together perfectly. I like the ...

ChocolateCello here! This was a very interesting piece. You did a wonderful job conveying the emotion. Okay, you have a lot of very minor error but if this is for ...

Hey! Welcome to the site! Cello here for quick review. Okay- I see what you were doing with the repetition but I feel like it loses the 'emotion' in the ...

Hey! Cello here! Out of the past three poems I've reviewed I complained about repetition in two of them. Let's make it three out of four! This was a good ...

Hey! Cello here! I read over the past reviews- they were mostly praise. I don't know about you, but I'm always wanting feedback to help me improve so here I ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! Interesting poem- I'm religious-ish but don't know anything about ezekiel (Or basically any bit of my religion for that matter) so i'd like ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! I really enjoyed this. The first 'happy' stanzas really contrasted with the final 'sad' stanzas. One thing though- Big, brown, Soft and fluffy, ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here for a requested review! I've only read half of this so far but I'm running short on time and I want to give some suggestions while they're ...

Hey! Cello here for a review! Welcome to YWS! A few very minor things I noticed- he fascinated me, and I despised him for it. 'He' should be capitalized. Make ...

Hey! Cello here! I must admit, this made me laugh quite a bit. This was really creative and cute. Minor edits- I want to see a huge headline Today, hot ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! (Nice Avvie by the way!) Well, this review is going to be short because there isn't a lot to review. Only error I ...

Hey! Cello here for a speedy review! Interesting story. Very sweet but takes a dark turn. Two big things I'd like to point out though. Tenses! For the majority of ...

ChocolateCello here! Okay, so this said 'lyrical' but I couldn't help but read it as a script. It kind of reminded me of the Shakespeare type stuff I've been reading... ...

Hey! Cello here! Interesting story. It's a very cliche story line, which is fine and all, but something was bothersome to me. Maybe the speed everything moved at? It was ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! This was a beautiful poem. You told a really meaningful story with very beautiful language. A few minor edits though O Lady of Love, This is just ...