ChiravianSkies

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Hello! Thank you for the review. I've got a question from the author about hyphenation rules, so ey were hoping you could clarify those for em so ey can improve! ...

Hello! Thank you for the review. I've got a question from the author about hyphenation rules, so ey were hoping you could clarify those for em so ey can improve! ...

Aaah, thanks for the review! I just wanted to say that this chapter was written before even the StevenBomb in January, so this story still relied on the Rose is ...

*Bows humbly* Thank you! :D

Not any actual language in the real world for sure. It's more so a bunch of words that I altered a crudload in order to make it gibberish, but is ...

(Sorry. Couldn't reply on the other review up above. Heh.) And I forgot. I've got chiravian images. :) )

Thanks. I kinda wanted to put a different perspective on the fountain-vision in the prologue. Really, until this Summer, "crap" was a major swear to me. Right under the S ...

Pfft. I don't even own a cell phone and understand every inch of chatspeak. This is actually mundane compared to ttyl 's chatspeak. (Entire novel written in it.) Great story ...

For rectification, if you really feel the need to keep the students in groups, then do more than rename the houses to similarly themed names, but even go far enough ...

No I haven't, actually. I kinda post as I write.

Haahaaa. Tyson's a Mantis Shrimp. I'm not fighting that sucker. *Was thinking of scaredy-prawn, but that didn't have the same ring to it.* But thank you for the review! Everything ...

Forest... Warm Summer night... Yep. You're pretty right. Well, Chiravians are pretty hard to describe... I couldn't really make this a part of the first chapter as these aren't the ...

Hullo! Thanks for the review, Chaser! All I really wanted to say was when the snow didn't touch Scuriv's wings was the part saying the Cave Tribe won't be there ...

Ahhh! Questions to answer! The true First is well, the first chiravian. The thing that diferrentiates him from the other First is that the other Firsts built the four Tribes; ...