ChiravianSkies

Good morning, you have accidentally stumbled on a MaddieMouse review. XD I like this story. Initially I was a bit confused because of the Media Res thing, but I got ...

I'm Maddie and I'll be writing a review for you today. :) First off, the title's drawn me in. I've been sucked in by this story multiple times due to ...

Hullo! I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work. Let's start now, eh? Your title is great. It makes me wonder the story revolved around John. Plot-wise, I like the ...

I'm Maddie, and I'll be reviewing your story! Holy cheese. That is all I could say. At first this story was from Eva's POV, which made me absolutely love her. ...

Hi, I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing this work. First off, I have absolutely no nitpicks about this story. Your characters seem absolutely real, and the idea is original. I ...

Chips, it seems you have made everyone on this website laugh, and I'm one of them. Having read the book Deeper Thoughts the other day, you remind me of that. ...

Nice prologue! It's got a very nice sense of suspense to it. Normally, there would be a few more paragraphs, just to break up any walls of text. I wonder ...

I really like this thing, but though you do have a different style, this seems very R.L. Stine-ish. The girl sees something and recites it, not believing it will really ...

I apologize, but this is a very confusing chapter 1. Though you and characterization are buddies, whenever the friends are talking, I can't make head nor tails of who it ...

Man, Wasabi. I think I teared up a bit. The story's very whimsical, and the god, because of the girl, doesn't get driven out. It's liek something clicked in his ...

(Phht. I lied. I'm too lazy to explore psyches at the moment.) Gosh, man. How do you do this? You seem to have the worlds so intricately done, with all ...

Your description is very poetic in this one. That's all I can say about it. I can't describe it any better, actually. XD The Voices kinda confuse me. Are they ...

I love how descriptive you make this story, but like below me, there is little to no context in what is going on. What events led up to the savage ...

I always love animal fantasy books, especially ones about small animals, so when I stumble don yours, I was pretty happy. So, onto the review! Mask seems a bit of ...

This prologue is gripping. Where people usually set the stage with a long prologue that can very well end up boring the readers, (Totally not me, cough.) You've managed to ...