Chirantha

Hi, Fun. Okay, are you really like this at your school? “Leandra. Wait man!” I cried, shouting at the top of my voice and running down the corridor. Firstly, you ...

Great poem. It really depicts the saddness and the sarrowness within you. It also shows how you hide your true feelings for him and pretend to be happy. I'd be ...

Okay, let me see. This story looks good but in a way it was not understandable. I mean, you seem to swich your character into different forms like a student, ...

I loved it. It did really bring out the facts about twins, but I kinda didn't like the fact about the twins forgetting about each other only in seven years. ...

Did you know? This doesn't rhyme like a poem. This is more like a rock song. :lol: Good work. Go on! Say your goodbyes! I don't know but the apostrophies ...

I don't know but it needed a bit more. But I do have some suggestions. Try to describe more. Like about how his normal life was like. And a few ...

I really liked your poem. It was good and it showed how that person needed the other. And I liked the way you ended every verse with 'I love you' ...

Ooooh, I loved it. How it almost told us a story. Well done. :D She always was like a God to me ( A period here ) Running her own ...

It was a sad little poem and I liked it. It was good. :) It has been a long year. Now its time to go, ( Maybe, put 'But, now ...

I really didn't understand what this poem was about but it was well written. Well done. There was a moment, yesterday.( It would be better if you cut the comma ...

This story confused me. Was your character in Japan or France? Who was Grandma Juliet? Kate's own grandmother or a neighbour? Where were Kate's parents? What were you talking about ...

I practically lived in the story. This was written so well, that I can't even make out a mistake. You really are improving. The two big cats bounded forward and ...

I don't know what to say. It was great. Awesome in fact. I cower in the corner, unobserved. Just a figment of your imagination, Until you bring me to life. ...

I don't know why but it didn't seem right. Maybe because it was short but I kinda didn't like it. I know, you haven't dwelled too long on metaphors and ...

Well, I liked it. It was great. Listen and listen good, for i will not retell. There should be comma after the first 'listen' and capitalize the 'I' They say ...