ChimeraMania

'Sorcerers has often told Mia that this could mean only one type of spirit was lurking around.' I think it would sound better if you say 'told Mia (if) this ...

Don't capitalize the I in, in at the beginning. (We live in a world....) Here. Murder. Sickness. Anorexia Drugs Organ failure. Car accidents. Suicide. If your going to put periods ...

I agree with everything @Hannawrites wrote, this was magical, peaceful, and vivid. When I read that quote I was like....Whoa. It fit so perfectly, I loved it. Okay, so just ...

Oh my gosh I just loved this, it seems so....romantic, well at least getting there to me anyway. I have a feeling that is not their names, but I like ...

Hey Hey, I'm up in the middle of the morning/night and I decided to help my team with a review since I got a bit of sleep and my headache ...

Heyo Sharrae here for a review on my third review day every. First of all this is one long tough cookie, and I love my cookies. Every single one of ...

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I, personally, feel here (such horror. Xavier feels as though he) you should start a new paragraph. I love the lengths, and the overall length in this prologue but I ...

I think it might be a little better without the second 'burn'. Here. (to burn away. burn. burn it all.) I feel after vomit you sound add a comma, it ...

I know I wasn't with the story from the beginning so if there is something wrong with my review please let me know. I think you should say Veronica's name ...

Oh my gosh are you serious, I'm so fake mad and real happy about this chapter. Fake mad because of how it ended. Okay so I'm not going to nick-pick. ...

OMGOSH Okay Okay first and foremost. This is the most interesting book I have read so far. Wattpad doesn't even compare to the brilliance in this. I absolutely love all ...

One Quick thing before I continue reading, it would be better as destined to pass instead of just destined pass. And one more instead of my tensed body came to ...

I don't know why but I really like the third one. But over all they are all equally good in their own way. I kinda which at least one of ...

Okay so imma just leave a comment cause i dont really have that much time that im aware of at the moment. But let me tell you a couple of ...