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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hexamon ~ 4

    The k ind that spoke a million words in one gesture. his grip was broken and he couldn’t hold on – couldn’t hold on to life – couldn’t hold on ...

    Aug 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 2.2

    Nothing about the shorts I wore in the winter or some kind of cold-induced sickness. Are you sure you meant to be or there, it kind of doesn't sound right ...

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Guardians Awakening/Chapter Four/Burning Girl and the Rebel Leader

    “What,” asks Luke, halting in his lock picking endeavor he turns to see Verlaine speeding up the concrete walk LOL it would be so funny if you had added 'halting ...

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Consequence

    This is really well written. I didn't expect him to do that to himself at the end. I actually believed he wanted the priest dead, but apparently not. I didn't ...

    Jul 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Geniturams

    When I first pick this I thought, "Why the title?" So I am here to find that answer and review for you guys. Now, first and foremost. She looked like ...

    Jul 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Prologue

    Okay, questionable, in a good way though. I didn't notice anybody review this part that stuck out to me though. Of how one would rise, and promptly fail. I fee ...

    Jul 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Escape to Reality

    OMGOSH what kind of story is this? I LOVE IT. It somewhat reminds me of James Patterson's Maximum Ride series mixed with something else. Very good. Now "I don't know. ...

    Jul 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Copper Dust: Chapter 1

    I don't think this'll be much of a review but I do have question which might just benefit you when you right more to this, I think. Sooo....quick question. How ...

    Jul 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Guardians Awakening/Chapter Three/ The First Day

    No matter what I'll always review. Just remember what it takes for my forgiveness. SO lets dig into this, shall I. First in foremost. It’s so far been a great ...

    Jul 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Melding - Chapter Two

    Hmmm....don't have any negative comments toward this. It's well written, nothing jumped out as needing to be changed or correct, as far as my eyes could see. Although, I'm starting ...

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hexamon ~ 3

    Told ya' I'd come for this one as well. This were his men. 'These were his men.' Maybe?? Then last of them was Grandelhorn, a sage from the region Ishk. ...

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hexamon ~ 1

    Clearly, the Steam of grandeur and bravado he had mustered through the regions of Gamil and rhea, when he appeared from nowhere to accept the grand challenge of the fairies ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Locksmith Chapter 2

    She eventually deciding to make soup, thinking it might warm her up. Her hopes of warming up as she drank the soup. You basically just said the same thing in ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Scale of Power- Chapter Three

    During World War Two they had been a beacon of hope for all. I'm thinking politically here and I feel you would be best to use the roman numerals II. ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Scale of Power- Chapter Five

    THIS IS AMAZING. Gosh, at first I thought they were just born with powers or something, but I'm excited to know that it was something totally different and I LOVE ...

    Jul 26, 2015


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