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I'm glad you liked it...I was struggling on rather I should put it here or not because it's not a story...but it's one very important lesson I learned about life...glad ...

Was it supposed to be like fiction or what? I've never heard of it before.

The Disney version and the real version were both wack to me. Victor Hugo is wack all the way around, if you ask me.

this poem...was very interesting. Walking home from life, I especially liked this part, but the run on sentences made me go out of breath.

even though this was a poem, it still seemed as though it were a story. but sometimes, poems like this are good. however, don't get me wrong! i loved this.

thanks a lot for the comments. it took me a lot to write this poem. i spent a lot of time working on it. especially the part about pride being ...

i cant ever seem to write sonnets. this one was good and i liked it alot. very consistent and even

Smoke hanging In the once-clean sky People on knees This part really caught me. I was...impressed. Very short and catchy. It was original and unlike other things I read about ...

OH MY GOSH, I LOVED THIS!!!! Probably because my name (Morgan) was in it.

It just seems like there should be something else in between: Vulnerability shones in those baby blues You must be wondering if I care what you have to say Sure ...

amazing how i have been writing since i could hold a pencil and can't touch this.

thanks everybody for the comments--they're really helpful. and brad, i'm going over it now and i will be revising it so everybody can tell me waht they think...but thanks for ...

Fast-paced, to the point, and right on target. You certainly got my attention, No flaws, no mistakes. I loved it.

no, these are the best lines: No matter how I try, No matter what I do. I cannot seem to find, I cannot speak to you. you sure are good...

oh wow....there is nothing you can say about a poem like this. this was excellent.