Chevy

considering I know the poems meaning and the story behind it. i'll have to say its an exceptional piece of work.

Ofcourse, I liked the guitar part the best. I wish I could write stuff like this for my dad! And its also a good thing you didn't wait until Father's ...

I was rather frustrated from beginning to end.

Um...that's not the real name for that is it? Hm...I dunna know...let me just leave that alone. Well, I liked it except for all the times where you repeated yourself...a ...

It was good...not really my style but it was good. But there's one thing: Indent.

Thanks Jack, I can always count on you for good crit. Anyway, I don't know if I want to change this...I'm trying to decide...

See! I knew you could do it! :Gives Brad a giant hug: You came back to it and look what you've got! I like this version better, of course and ...

aghhh! my eyes!!!,lol. i liked this poem. don't ask me why, but it reminded me of "the red" by chevelle which is one of my favorite songs/videos.

well, jack, i think this is the best thing i've read by you..you really did a good job on this. it was so fresh--unlike a nything else ive ever read, ...

All the "I cans" and "I can'ts" were very annoying, I must say. It remembered me so much of Everytime by Britney Spears.

lol. thanks a lot niteowl..but yeah, that's what i meant.

I never really read this poem I don't think...but it really rocks because it's about a guitar...

i don't know where to start... ... ... ... ... perhaps i'll end it here.

i agree with jack. it's not really my style either but even though it's sort of repetitive, i still sort of like it.

I'll have to disagree with EBM...this is quite the dramatic. Probably one of the best dramatic things I've ever read, really. My dramatic stuff can't touch this,lol. GO WHITNEY!!!