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Eight years old? Heck, wish I could say my stuff that long ago looked like this. Anyway, this was very inviting...from the beginning to the end. It's consistency carried out ...

I wanted to see how far half a tank of gas would get me Hm...that sounds familiar...:looks around...stops at brad: The concept, is very favorable. I loved that. However, I'm ...

I'll go I'll leave Standing out side the window looking in Longing to be on the other side This was the most--if not the only enjoyable part of the whole ...

Well, I really truly loved the first scene. It was very interesting and I could relate. However, the story seemed to drop dead once it got to the scene with ...

well, i honestly thought i already commented on this...i guess this i havent then... anyway, i liked it even though it was kind of lengthy and dragged on a bit. ...

Well, first of all, this poem is indeed cliche to the max, the title itself gives that away. Inside I died a million times for you Oh wow. I loved ...

‘Mind’ she muttered. ‘Mind!’ she called louder. I really liked the poem until this. Did you mean, "Mine?" But even if you had, it doesn't really fit with the type ...

hm...i thought i commented on this earlier...i guess it didn't go through. but anyway, i must admit i was impressed by the amount of words you found that ended in ...

Yes, this poem was rather on the long side and I kept thinking to myself, like, when the heck is this going to end. Well, anyway, in general, I liked ...

It burns, it rips It tears, it trips Me up On the ground Really, you should consider taking this out. I mean, it doesn't really fit with the poem that ...

Tuna flesh??? I'm...confused, which is nothing new, so don't take it personal. Anyway, the poem had a nice flow, but I just kept getting lost...there was too much going on...perhaps ...

Well, I didn't necessarily like it after the first two stanzas, and I only liked the first two, really because I found potential in both. Instead of four lines, you ...

Silence never comes screaming voices, Did you mean, Silence never comes through screaming voices (?) I don't know, I could be wrong...either way I liked this line. I also agree ...

Well, I don't think this poem lacked meaning, in fact, I thought it was really good...I really enjoyed it actually. I just think you should probably like, add another stanza ...

This sounds like this thing I did last night--only this is not a compliment. :cry: Well, I'll have to agree with Brad--this poem lacked any type of point that there ...