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I like how you put the exact time you completed it...I wish I could remember to that. Well, the poem in general, for me atleast was hard to grasp...hard to ...

Well, it made sense to me because I read that one...or so I think I did. Agh, I've got such bad memory. Anyway, this was my favorite part: My wingless ...

(upon request) :ahem: Well, over all, I enjoyed it. And yes...the narrator was rather comical. But there were a few things.... 1. Indent! Indent! Indent! 2. "As I noticed the ...

i reading a poem by brad that rhymes? quirkiness is definitely evident,lol. anyway, first off i'd like to thank you for a normal sized font. i didn't have to past ...

I can really relate to this. Reminds me so much of last weekend it's unbelievable. You've inspired me to do something, Brad. This is the poem I have been trying ...

Well, the poem in general was very original and seemed sort of lyrical but then again, it would not have fit in that sappy section (which I personally loathe. )Anyway, ...

The same old clutter surrounds me What do I say what do I write? The first two lines were horrid, and I hated them, but the poem got a lot ...

Now I feel really stupid and kinda guilty that I didn't even pick up on that... I'm so sorry to hear that, Brad. I wasn't going "nitpick" this particular poem ...

It's amazing at how creative you were when speaking of something so small as a butterfly. I'm not one for nature or animals ('cept for dogs of course) but this ...

To tell you the truth, this didn't really seemed to be broken up to me at all. I guess because it seemed so much like a short story, which was ...

well, this isn't really my style...maybe i'm just not cut out for lyric poetry. : shrugs : that's probably what it is. but that's strange though...considering if you go back ...

The beginning, especially the first line sounded sort of well, I don't think there's any other word for it except for "lame." However, the rest of the poem is very ...

Well, this is a good poem--as far as the people you are speaking of are concerned. I personally, was able to enjoy considering you've told me a lot about these ...

I know everyone's telling you, you don't need to stop, and how much of a great poet you are. Not saying that you aren't a great poet, but I am ...

Transfixed Hypnotized I close my eyes For some strange reason I started thinking about Muse...which isn't a bad thing considering I love Muse, but the rest of the poem was ...