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Gosh...everything somehow relates to music...heh. I do that alot. "Conducted through bones," --Incredible phrase. *Jots down in notebook" lol, jk. "I could close my eyes as well, join you in ...

First stanza: mmmywahh--it was so emo I almost choked. Second stanza: it was so beautiful I almost died. Third stanza: so heart breaking I think I did die. Overall, even ...

"A tear falls down her cheek... it caresses, shimmering in the moonlit night. Blonde strands of hair fall in her cold blue-grey eyes as she weeps. her hands got to ...

Good poem. I loved the ending the most. You know, I never particularily cared for this style but you're actually pretty darn unique. I can tell that you don't allow ...

"One" and "Undone" do not rhyme. "Home" and "Known"--eh, borderline--but it still doesn't rhyme. "Released" and "Peace" do not rhyme. "Happiness" and "Angels" do not rhyme and "Touched by a ...

This seems like one of those poems you hear read aloud at one of those poetry thingies. I was falling asleep until I got here: "40 paracetamol and a bottle ...

The first stanza sounded familiar. Did you have that in another poem? I loved the reference to music as Crysi said and the imagery was good as TBR said, but ...

You smell like the perfume Impulsion and Caprice should be your middle name, because you're so predictably I think you should put a comma or some kind of indication at ...

Oh Brett, that was beautiful. Why didn't I read this sooner? I loved the guitar reference of course. The ending was unexpected, yet powerful and perfect--for--an ending that is. I ...

For a rhyming poem it was pretty good but it did seemed forced in some places such as, "Two sinless beings with no meaning for shame One destiny: only to ...

The entire poem reminded me of something I would find in the Young-Adult section of the library. No problem with this, of course but personally, I am really tired of ...

How realistic and literal. God, that's when I love it the most. I loved the last would end perfectly at one of my unreleased poems. *Looks around* For some reason, ...

I'll have to say, there's not much to say. The last stanza was the best. And um...wow. I didn't hesitate reading this poem twice. I should be giving productive critiquing ...

Well, I'm not really one for fantasy but this one was very didn't just scream out at you "Hey look at me! I'm fantasy fiction!!!" It flowed very well, and ...

"one day you will find yourself chasing it blindly throwing money for greedy lawyers and hoping you can make a great escape, fall into the arms of your saviour and ...