CherryScriptAMK

Okay, this is very interesting. I feel suspicious towards Cecilia. She seems strange, and a bad influence to be around. I think whatever she does that Eliza is unaware of ...

Interesting. I liked how the first sentence was 'The year was 1987.' It gives it a dramatic sort of feel. The story makes me wonder a few things, mostly where ...

Hi! I feel pretty good about the descriptions. I mean, they didn't particularly stand out as great or horrible; I didn't really make note of anything like that while reading. ...

Wow, this is so good!!! I'm going to review with the YWS S'mores Method. Top Graham Cracker: This gave a great first impression! I immediately was able to tell many ...

Hi! I'm going to be reviewing with the YWS Smore method. Top Graham Cracker: When I began to read this story, I was instantly hooked. I find myself really wanting ...

Hi! I'm going to be using the YWS Smore Method to review this work. Top Graham Cracker: This is a very interesting prologue! I always love it when prologues have ...

This prologue is AMAZING! One of the best I ever read. I really like the rising suspense happening to Alwin. The girl who claims she isn’t a fairy seems very ...

Wow, this is really good. I just love how you start the chapter mysteriously, ant the word 'couldn't' somehow really added to the suspense. I am excited to learn more ...

This is a very interesting piece of work. The words are very descriptive, helping the readers envision what is going on in the book well. The only thing you might ...

Nice story! It has a really good hook, keeping readers wanting more. You did a great job building the atmosphere and the sense of dread. I can tell that there ...

This is a great story! I really like the plot and the way you show us how typical Lena's life was. I'd enjoy reading more! Here are some suggestions for ...