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Hey MysteryMe, This was, wow. It was so full of emotion, and the concept was so clear, and so bold, it took my breath away. I’m not sorry I’ve moved ...

Hello again, holly. Cheetah here to review your poem! First off, I want to say I really like this. The concept itself makes sense and I definitely can relate to ...

Hello DragonLily, Cheetah here to review your piece for you today. Wow, just wow. You blew me away with this. The way it was structured, it could have been prose, ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review your poem. I really enjoyed reading this. It was all very clear to me and held a kind of wonder. Good job! Solid limbs Usually ...

Hi Holly, Cheetah here to review your piece! I really liked this, it was like I was in her life, watching it unfold. The strongest part, and the part I ...

Hello Silverlock, Cheetah here to review your piece! This was beautiful, simply breathtaking. I don't know how you can make writing sound this good. I liked a lot of things ...

Hello LifeUnknown, Cheetah here to review your story! I enjoyed reading this. It was simple, and it was captured in a moment. I liked that. I also liked the 'Putts.' ...

Heya, Cheetah here to review your story! Wow, that was creepy. I forgot to read the tags and thought it was just a short story so the ending was a ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review your story for you! Although I myself am usually not a big fan of third person, the way you did it was wonderful and I ...

Hello Deanie, Cheetah here to review your story! This was very well written and to the point. There's nothing really in the way of the plot that seems to need ...

Hia blimeylimey! Cheetah here to review your piece. Your first short story you say? This was very well done! I really liked the description you used on the slimy creature ...

Cheetah here to review your story. Let me first say that this was very, very well written. The plot was clear and the pace was absolutely perfect. There were no ...

Hey there Bugslake! Cheetah here to review your story! I'm happy to have found such an emotional piece. I can feel every emotion coming from your character, the way you ...

Hey Faith, Cheetah here to review for you this morning. This was very enjoyable to read! I loved it! I don't normally review haikus, but these were excellent. The one ...

Hey Alex, Cheetah here to review your chapter! This is such an interesting concept! It's unique and you could really do a lot with the whole idea of Antarctica and ...