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Hey, Cheetah here to review your poem! Before we get started with the review, I wanted to get this out of the way: with he fingers crossed behind her back. ...

Cheetah here to review your poem! Your style is honest and unique. I haven't seen anything quite like it. I love it! I've noticed from reading another one of your ...

Hey, friend! Cheetah here to review! Everyone seems to have pointed out the nitpicks already. :( So this will be a short review. I loved the metaphor in the first ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review your story! Where was Bedelia? He searched frantically among the horde for the woman he loved as a dreadful feeling settled in him. I like ...

Hello Dennis, Cheetah here to review your prologue! Interesting idea here, I haven't seen anything like this before! However, the first thing I saw when I started reading this was ...

Hey Wolfare! Cheetah here to review your piece! First of all, I really liked this. It had a lot of detail and just the right amount of dialogue. Well done! ...

Hey Messenger, Cheetah here to review your piece. Wow. This is so true on so many levels. You completely changed my look on Frozen, how if Elsa had just loved ...

Hey Brunnera, Cheetah here to review your story! I love this! There's curiosity, wonder, and friendship. You've even mixed culture into this, which made it all the more intriguing. Now ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review your poem. First of all, I want to say this is really good. The way you talked about each situation was different. For some of ...

*sneaks in* Hey! Cheetah here to finally review your chapter! Very good! So far this is looking interesting. I'm curious about if her parents will actually make the trip (although ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review this magnificent piece. (I apologize in advance if I accidently mix up their names and say that George died or something.) Pompadour. You confuse me ...

Hello Soulkana, Cheetah here to review your chapter! You have an interesting plot going on here, and I think you've developed it very well in this chapter. Not even the ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review your chapter! This story looks interesting and I'd love to read more. The way you only have Avril's thoughts at first, with no dialogue, gives ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review! Wow. You've certainly started out in the middle of the action! It's an unique approach, well done on that. I get the feeling this is ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review your piece on behalf of the Majestic Icicles! Okay, let me first say this has been in the back of the Green Room way too ...