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Hey, creeperfeverdream! Cheerio with another review! 1. I love that we've jumped into the future to see Stefania's husband and children. 2. It sucks that they don't believe her and ...

Hello, creeperfeverdreams! I'll be reviewing this story today. Because it's so long I decided to read parts at a time, then write, then read again, then write, etc. I'll be ...

G'day, creeperfeverdreams! It's Cheerio again. I decided to come back to this series since I was done with Alice and the Aliens. I must say that I'm really impressed with ...

Hey, creeperfeverdreams! It's Cheerio with my final review for this series. It's been a rollercoaster of emotions, but alas, we have arrived. I'll be using my Pumpkin Pie method for ...

Cheerio here with another review! Of course I'll be using the Pumpkin Pie method to review this story. I feel a bit sad that it's coming closer to the end. ...

G'day, here to review another story. The crust (the foundation of your story): 1. Love that Alice took action instead of being frozen in fear (cuz I would've been for ...

Cheerio here with a review! Let's get it. (using the pumpkin pie method ofc, I know you're probably tired of it by now. Sorry. I'll make another one soon. But ...

Hola, creeperfeverdreams! Let's just jump right into it: (Pumpkin Pie style of course...because it's fall...and I like pumpkin pie :) ) The crust (the foundation of your story): 1. I ...

Hey there, creeperfeverdreams! it's Cheerio with another review. I'll be using my Pumpkin Pie method as usual. Let's goooo! The crust (the foundation of your story): 1. Great transition from ...

Hello, creeperfeverdreams! It's Cheerio with a review for Part 3 of Alice and the Aliens. Here we go! What I loved: 1. I enjoyed the quiet moment that Alice and ...

G'day mate! Lol, it's Cheerio! Today I'll be using my Pumpkin Pie Method to review this lovely piece. Let's gooooo!!!! The Crust (the foundation of your story): 1. Nice transition ...

Hey, creeperfeverdreams! It's Cheerio here with a review of this wonderful story. As I've done for your others, I'll be using my Pumpkin Pie Method (since it's fall and I've ...

G'day! Here to leave a review using my Pumpkin Pie Method. Let's go! The Crust (the foundation): 1. Characters are introduced nicely. well done. 2. World-building was pretty good (could ...

Hello again! Here to review using my Pumpkin Pie Method. Let's do it! The crust (the foundation): 1. I love that this story is from B392's little brother's POV. 2. ...

G'day! Here to leave a review for this wonderful story. I'll be using my Pumpkin Pie method. Let's go! The Crust (the foundation of your story): 1. The Characters were ...