ChasingLaci

Stop being so Leary Charley!! Lol jk

This is exactly what I would have said, I don't even feel the need to review this now haha

I see what you're saying, not the most interesting, I agree. Ill had to work on it. Its just old so I feel like I can't really revisit how i ...

Haha Thanks for your review, I agree about the second stanza. Got rid of it!! You're funny I like the way u dropped this sweet review right up in huurrr!! ...

I dont agree with the rearranging of the lines but I do know what ur talking about with having Sad Spring at the beginning. Ive left it out and keep ...

Thank you!!

I'm really glad you felt such a connection with it. I love when I read something that feels like my own. :D -Laci

No that would be great!! Would b possible to send me a recording? I love when poetry inspires people and it turns into music! :D That would be lovely. -Laci

"The little green button shows you're online and I wonder what you're thinking. Do you ever still think of me? Or am I just another boat drifting by along your ...

:P Lol Thanks

Thank you Coralyn!! I agree with you there about that line, Im still thinking on what to do with it and where to go. I appreciate the review!!! :D -Laci

awww Thank you so much!!! That's so nice to hear! :D -Laci

HAHA That always happens to me when I read with music on!! Thank you though, you totally got it. :D -Laci

Thank You Runawaylove!! I did have trouble with punctuating the first three lines. I originally had it go like this: " Summer rain, Pours down, So fast." But then i ...

Nymix, I liked your review! I agree that there could be a second part, I saw it in a similar light as you've just described here. "I've always enjoyed the ...