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Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 1
Hey Dest! I'm here to do that review you requested. If you finish reading this review and have still have questions feel free to PM me or just comment your ...
Feb 1, 2017 -
Re: The Pariah of Levon, 1
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Feb 1, 2017 -
Re: Before
Hey Falconer! Here's a small review. I very much like this work but I have a few things to say. The first thing and pretty much the only thing that ...
Jan 30, 2017 -
Re: antisocial
Hey Rose! This is a good poem but I felt it was worded oddly. Like everything was reversed. This is how I think you should correct it. the wooden planks ...
Jan 24, 2017 -
Re: A Part-time Bucketmaker
Hey, Hannah! Wow! This poem is really good. I found some of the repetition unnecessary: why and why and and drops his hands down and drops his eyes down. but ...
Jan 8, 2017 -
Re: girls are not dolls
Hey, Charlotte2! I enjoyed this poem as it's short, straight to the point, and powerful. I felt like it was simple but that was actually one of its strengths. I ...
Jan 8, 2017 -
Re: faux pas.
Hey, amelie! I actually really liked this poem. I enjoy short poems with powerful messages. This poem also sounds really nice when being read out loud, but I found it ...
Jan 8, 2017 -
Re: Cat Steps Chapter 3.3
Hey, Rosendorn! I haven't read any of your other chapters, but I'm still going to try my best to give you a good quality review c: The first thing I ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Rain Is Laughing at Me
Hey! Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here and continue to post things. I found this poem interesting. I didn't love it but I totally did not hate ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: Battle Field Of The Mind
Hey, Sophia! I'm excited that you are trying to write poetry. So far this is a really good start. I found the flow was really good but the formatting/grammar was ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: Disturbed
Hey, JustOneMorePoem! I'm here to review your poem. I hope you find my review helpful. First, I wanted to talk grammar. And grammar is not necessary to poetry, but I ...
Dec 17, 2016 -
Re: Bus Trip (Edited)
Hey, Dracula! Here for that promised review! Thanks for your great review on my chapter btw~! She then skipped down the path towards the bus stop, where the long community ...
Dec 16, 2016 -
Re: Winged Hope
Hey SirLight! I don't think I've reviewed any of your poems, but I have read a few! I hope you find my review helpful~! I really liked the first stanza, ...
Dec 14, 2016 -
Re: Follow The Stars (Edited)
Hey Dracula! I'm going to try and review your short. This is my first time reading it, so I'm not sure how much it has improved. I hope my review ...
Dec 14, 2016 -
Re: Night Blossoms: Chapter 1
Hey DorianBlaine! I decided to review this and your second chapter to help you get it out of the green room. I hope you get something from this review. Have ...
Dec 13, 2016