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Even if I'm slow I will walk with my own feet, because I know this path is mine to take, I will never lose my dream.

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: fairgrounds

    Hey Lupa22! I'm here to review your lovely poem. I really love the first stanza and the beginning to the poem. I'm like the Queen of Nostalgia haha so yes ...

    Mar 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Don't text in my class!

    Hey Daisy! I'm here to review your short. I felt your short lacked scene setting in the beginning. I think it's important to give your readers something for them to ...

    Feb 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Making Lemonade

    Hey PrincessInk! I'm here to review your awesome poem! I'm actually someone who loves citrus and lemons actually my phone case is covered in lemons. If you have any questions ...

    Feb 14, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Quest to a Mountain

    Hey Brownbomd! I'm here to review your short story and like you said in your author's note, I'll do my best to help you improve grammar wise and plot wise. ...

    Feb 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: ghost of you

    Hey dramamine! I'm here to review your poem for RED! If you have any questions concerning my review feel free to PM me or comment them. As always, I'll try ...

    Feb 12, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Health Re: I missed YWS

    Hey DukeofWonderland! I'm here to review your "Other". If you have any questions concerning my review feel free to PM me or comment them! As always, I'll try my best ...

    Feb 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: love is wrapped around death's finger

    Hey herbgirl! I wanted to review this poem because the title really got my attention and I wanted to tell you my praise-ful thoughts on this piece. If you have ...

    Feb 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: No, I'm not...

    Hey AkankshaD! I'm here to review your poem! If you have any questions or concerns concerning my review feel free to PM me or comment them. I'll always try my ...

    Feb 8, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Play it Cool, Al!

    Hey Dest! I'm here to review this short story for you! I'm reviewing this at 1:28am so my mind might be a little wacky. Anyway, if you have any questions ...

    Feb 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: this boy

    Hey BlueRose15~ I'm here to review your poem! If you have any questions or concerns about my review don't be shy to PM me or comment them! Also I reviewed ...

    Feb 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Titania (edited)

    Hey Pentavalence! I'm here to review your work for you! If you have any questions feel free to PM me or comment them. I'll try to respond as fast and ...

    Feb 6, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: Depression

    Hey XxPheonixKittenxX. I'm going to review your "other" and I hope I can help improve it in some way. I notice this is a touchy subject and personal so I ...

    Feb 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 19 ~ Megalonia

    Hey Felistia! I haven't read any chapters of this before but I still want to help you with a review. I'll try to do my best and if something I ...

    Feb 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: 100 Pills

    Hey StormCycle. I'm here to review your poem for RED. If you have any questions feel free to PM me or comment them. I realize this poem deals with some ...

    Feb 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: mint-like.

    Hey Amelie! I'm here to do that review you requested. If you finish reading this review and have still have questions feel free to PM me or just comment your ...

    Feb 1, 2017


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