Charm

This was really good and I related to it a lot. I'm always here if you need me and I know it can get annoying to here because I've been ...

Hey I'm here to review your poem and tell you what I think of it. Everything I say is just my opinion and I am well aware that my opinion ...

Hey I'm here to review your poem! I found this poem to have great potential. I feel like it lacks that oomph that leaves your readers in awe. I feel ...

Hey I really liked this poem and I thought it was really good short poem to motivate someone. I don't have much to say except that the last line, "go ...

Hey I really liked this poem. The flow was perfect and made it sound really nice to read. Sorry if I give you a bad mood I'm in a weird ...

Hey Ever. This is a really nice poem. I've noticed that you changed the repeating lines which confused me quite a bit because I didn't notice until after and I ...

Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . Plot, Pace and Point of View There wasn't much shock in the robbery. Maybe you could talk ...

Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . Plot, Pace and Point of View The plot was amazing. This had so much uniqueness to it! ...

Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . Plot, Pace and Point of View I found this confusing and hard to follow. I honestly don't ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem~ I found that this poem has a ton of potential! It's seems rather short and simple which I think it's the concept you ...

Hey I'm here to review your poem~ Things I liked: -I like the childish love story feel. -I like the rhyming and the flow of the poem Things I didn't/Things ...

Now this is art. I knew when you told me what your poem was about that it was going to be awesome. This is better than I imagined! The only ...

Hey EverWinter! This is a lovely poem and it flows nicely. There are some moments where the flow falls a little: "Or do I hide, Never catching your gaze?" and ...

Hello! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . I'm here to review your poem~ I'm new to poetry but I'm hoping I can be of ...

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