Charm

Hey! I'm here to review your work! "You make me blush. You listen to me." There was a sudden switch in the repetition that threw me off. I'd recommend making ...

Hey! I'm here to review your chapter. I hope my review is helpful. I'm trying to improve my reviews so if you think I'm being too harsh or too nice ...

Hey! First some corrections: When you were here We had some fun My heart growing each time we talk Then you leave me Breaking this heart Have me looking for ...

Hey! I really loved this poem but I wasn't fond of the bolding and the spacing out. I would love to see the format like this: M a y b ...

Hey! In this home of hate, Of anger, bitter, jealousy. I live with them, In this broken home. I feel like 'in this home of hate' and 'i live with ...

Hey! I really liked this poem. I loved the way it was written. I loved the rhyme scheme. I feel like the last sentence wasn't that great. I'd love it ...

Hey Martin! I really liked this poem. I feel like the words and emotions are very genuine and I can really feel what the narrator is feeling. It flows very ...

Hey! It's me...reviewing...your work... I really liked this poem but I think one thing that I would change is, instead of bolding the word 'darkness' I think it would not ...

Hey! Just me, here to review your work... "Know this, that if you come to my home, you will be greeting with a light to pierce your veil of darkness ...

Hey! I'm here to review your short! "He worked and worked on a pretty small salary." I would love it if you could reword this. I feel like the word ...

Hey! I really liked this poem. It was elegant and beautiful. It reminded me of anime and of Japan which makes me excited. The wording and imagery was really poetic ...

Hey! I really liked this poem. I thought the wording was beautiful and really poetic. I love the vocabulary you used. I would recommend doing what @Eternity said, I think ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem! I hope my review is helpful! :D "It's start out slow." I think this is the correction: It started out slow. "Those grow ...

Hey! Here I am finally to review your work finally! I hope this review is satisfactory! This review might be a little short since I'm very busy and short on ...

Hey! Here I am finally to review your work finally! I hope this review is satisfactory! This review might be a little short since I'm very busy and short on ...