Charlotte2

This isn't trying to say that I could truly get rid of all the pain. It's saying that for a moment, we were both struggling together. 'Sharing it with me' ...

Don't read it if you don't like it.

Thanks! I'll take the title thing into consideration.

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

I do have another poem on that which I hope to upload in the near future because I do believe that if you portray yourself in the wrong way you ...

Thank you!

Thank you for the review!

Heya! This is a very unique poem. I liked how abstract it was, and I just think it's very interesting. Well done!

I wrote this quite quickly, but I'm not sure how to improve it, so if you have suggestions, I'd be happy to hear them.

Thank you!

This is so unique, but so interesting! I liked it a lot.

Hello! Thanks for the review; it was very helpful. I see what you mean about that line, so I'll go back over that. I also get the thing about italics, ...

Oh, I did mean to write devas. I'm Buddhist, and a deva is a spiritual being. But don't worry about it, your review was still very helpful, and I'm glad ...

Thank you. This really helped.

Okay, I get your point. But I have not mentioned any names, and I have gone and told two responsible adults about it. It's a lot harder than you think ...