Charliebo

hello! Ok, this is a nice poem, but there were a few things that were troubling me about it... A fleeting Moment i really like the word fleeting Or a ...

hehe! i really, REALLY love this poem! It's amazing, and i really mean it. You have written it with such a great style. I'm not entirely sure about the title, ...

Interesting idea. It's left nicely open for the reader to imagine what his dreams are of, and i like that aspect especially. Also, the phrase beautiful dreamer is a nice ...

wow. Really, i loved it. You are obviously an excellent poet. I have extremely little criticism about this, but here it is... I think that the line breaks are a ...

hey! i just had to comment - i thought that it was an interesting idea, and it hasn't been done before (right...?). Also, there were loads of lovely lines in ...

really gorgeous. I think what was so great about this poem was that every line was important, individual and really fluid with rhythm. There was only one point that the ...

hi. i think it's interesting to read stuff about issues of today, and it was brave, really, to write a poem about this, but i have two main arguments against ...

Once I found a four leafed clover Lying on the ground, breaking the line into an ABAB rhyme scheme rather than couplets may make the rhythm easier for the reader ...

hello ^^ this poem had a perfectly gently atmosphere. I loved it. And i agree - i love rain too. The sound and the feel of it are soothing, and ...

dude, really good job! Really, i love it and i'm not just saying that! I didn't even know that you wrote such amazing poetry, nat! I adored your use of ...

Hi! This poem has a lot of potential. It's not very soppy, either and you have some really beautiful imagery going on... I feel this tickle in my stomach Ticklish, ...

very interesting. I must admit that i wasn't sure whether you were being metaphorical about the blanket (i feel like an idiot for admitting it!), but i liked the poem. ...

really great! Excellent final stanza. one thing, really. It may have been done for a specific purpose, but i think you might need to change the 4th/5th lines and the ...

i think this is a very interesting poem. To be honest, i didn't really like the more coloquial (please excuse crappy spelling) terms, like 'yeah, right.' I think it's because ...

it's certainly contentious! look at how many reviews you've snagged! :) my only real critisism is the repitition of 'my brother has a gun'. it's good at the end when ...