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Re: Whomerlock: Chapter 2
Uther, the king of Camelot, was sitting down at a granddining table eating his dinner. He was very content with devouring his mashedpotato and bread, so was extremely disheartened when ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Flashing Pixels
Omg i love this song first of all and personally I think you should sing it on youtube if you are a singer and or you should get someone to ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 25:
1. first did u tell everyone this was going to be used in curse words because my mom was very shocked when she caught me reading that. After that you ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 16) Part 1: Two-bit Bridle
Hello there , I Love this very much but is the word Pfeifer really a word or did you just make it up. Because I have a MacBook so it ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: .
I have a question, First what happened to her or his shoulder and shouldn't you have put stuck out my tongue I mean in quotes? Now for criticism after "I ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Anxiety
Hello , we were just talking a few minutes ago I really love this and its amazing but I don't want to criticize it and everything so I'm going to ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: Him
Hello , So how is it dramatic and a fantasy and because this is really confusing me and u spelled library wrong. Second the grammar is unbearable it is wrong ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: Wait, What
Hello, so first the description isn't really realistic you should write a better description so people would read your story and not think its weird or bad. When you said ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: The Escapists, Ch.1
Hi Comrie, Here is a review for you. Now I love love love your story now the first paragraph made me want to not stop reading this book. How come ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: Lifeline chapter 3
Okay , so on the last part you shouldn't have wrote it in poem form when this was supposed to be a book. Why did you start paragraphs again and ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: Typo Alley~F Part Two
Why is the story called typos because I need to know are there real typos in here or is it just the name of the story. Did you use Hobbit ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: The Fox
Hi Fortis, I really like this poem but i have a few questions and i would like to correct a few things. How come you put this ; after the ...
Dec 16, 2014
