ChangeTheWorld

I like the quote in the beginning. In the first section the writing isn't bad, it just doesn't really grab me a lot. Maybe it feels like you're telling me ...

So I like when people critique my work so I'm just going to comment as I go. "The time I spent thinking about it surpassed absurdity by a landslide." This ...

I like this. In the beginning i like how it refutes the common saying that our bodies are sacred temples and it comes back with metaphoric comparisons. It's a witty ...

Okay so I'm just going to review as I read. The second paragraph was confusing to me. I had to read it three times to figure out those were his ...

I like your rhyming pattern, it was effective for the most part but I didn't feel as emotion in this poem as I think I could have considering the subject. ...

I think this is the kind of poem that might sound better not rhyming. Usually I love poems that rhyme but I don't like that it's the same rhyme four ...

Love, love! Usually this format is annoying but it was really effective for this piece and I wouldn't have had it any other way. Right away when you started crossing ...

This is featured for a reason! Because it's amazing. The whole concept is so out of this world. It's the kind of thing a person can be jealous about because ...

I liked it a lot. To begin with you have a good overall style. The repeating for emphasis and all the specific numbers. You show us a lot about the ...

I loved it, and poetry always has to hit my the right way, you know? Yours did :) I liked when you listed the things that washed up that were ...