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Celticmusicgirl

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Mistress of the Moon

    Hi, I'm Celticmusicgirl and I'll be reviewing this today. Wow! I really loved this. I have always been fond of the Greek and Roman myths. THey are so fascinating. I ...

    Nov 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Rain

    Hi, I'm Celticmusicgirl and I'll be reviewing your work today. So I really liked this piece. It is short and simple. I don't normally like stuff that's long and complicated. ...

    Nov 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Partners

    Hi, I'm Celticmusicgirl and I'll be reviewing your work here today. I really liked this piece. It is sort of like twilight in that it is a different take on ...

    Nov 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Historical Fiction Re: The Soldier

    Hi, I'm Celticmusicgirl and I'll be reviewing this piece today. I really liked this piece. I like the emotion you displayed in this piece. you did a really good job. ...

    Nov 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Calligraphist

    Hi, I'm Celticmusicgirl and I'll be reviewing your work today. Alright, I really enjoyed this piece. It is very interesting. I like how you included the details about how Laura's ...

    Nov 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Facing the Fire: part 1

    Hi, I'm Celticmusicgirl and I'm going to review this piece today. First, I really liked this piece. This was very interesting. However, there were a few small errors I would ...

    Nov 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Prologue - Together We Make The Elements (Working title)

    Hi, I'm Celticmusicgirl and I'll be reviewing this piece of work today. My review shall focus mainly on spelling/grammar and how it makes sense and flows. I really liked this ...

    Oct 8, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: An El Salvador Halloween

    Hi! I'm Celticmusicgirl and I am going to focus my review on spelling/grammar, how the story flows, etc. If you have any questions about what I point out, please feel ...

    Oct 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Ink ~ Chapter Six

    HI! I am Celticmusicgirl. I am going to focus my review on spelling, grammar and how if flows and makes sense. The first thing I noticed is that toward the ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Raindrops

    Hi I'm Celticmusicgirl, but you may call me Celtic for short and I'll be reviewing this piece today. I am mostly going to start with what I really liked about ...

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Riddle House- PT.1

    my review shall focus mainly on spelling, grammar, punctuation, how your sentences flow and make sense, and above all how your story flows. "Yes, colonial days, the story goes back ...

    Aug 6, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Blood Rage Ch1

    OK so there are a few things I spotted that might need correcting. The first thing I noticed is the following: "I never have, all I know is that I ...

    Jul 13, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where I must go

    Right now all I can say is wow this is a really good piece I felt as if it were me thinking these thoughts. I did not see any grammatical ...

    Jul 10, 2012
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Twilight "Eclipse" fanfic of Rosalie's story to Bella

    ok so i am very curious as to how you came up with this. this is very interesting. There are only 2 things i see that you could adjust. 1. ...

    Jun 4, 2012
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Elven Sword Fight

    my review will just be on the positive side. I shall pick out the good things in your story instead of picking out flaws. ok wow I really like your ...

    May 29, 2012


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