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  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Unrefined

    Hey, Catalyst here for a review! I'll be perfectly honest with you-- I'm usually not much for poetry. I dip my feet in from time to time, but when it ...

    May 25, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Iris (chapter 1)

    Catalyst here with a review! Before I get into the meat of the story, here's some nitpicks; "She felt her eyelids heavy." I assume this is a typo-- The correct ...

    May 25, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: the librarian of parkour paradise

    Heyo! Catalyst here for a review! *Lights flare as Catalyst steps on stage, microphone in hand, baton in the other* Right! I really enjoyed this little piece. Firstly, I'll address ...

    Sep 21, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.1

    Hey there! Catalyst here to trade reviews! This is probably one of the most immediately charming pieces I've read on this site. Ever. The creative premise is conveyed excellently, the ...

    Sep 19, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: A Song of Exile - Prologue: Sun and Stars pt. I

    Hey there! I'm here to escort this great fantasy piece out of the Green Room. Seeing as Fantasy is where almost all of my writing is aimed, I'm going to ...

    Jul 27, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Science Fiction
    Re: Fire and Wind Chapter 4-Chapter 5

    Hey there, Catalyst here for a review! Al-right, so you have quite a nice premise here, it's quite intriguing. I'll get into areas where description, plot and character development can ...

    Mar 22, 2016

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Ry

    Hey there, Catalyst here for a quick review, right after the tears dry off of my computer! .... Ok, we're good! So, I really liked this short, sad piece. It's ...

    Mar 16, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General
    Re: Astrid: the girl of the stars (Chapter 1 The poem)

    Hey, Catalyst here for a review! Alright, so this was quite a nice introductory piece, I love a lot of the description, and I'm getting a great sense of character. ...

    Mar 15, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General
    Re: More Than What it Seems. Chapter 1

    Heyo, Catalyst, here for a review! I enjoyed this short little Chapter quite a bit! In fact, I actually felt it was a little short for a novel chapter. Still, ...

    Mar 13, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: In All That I Live For (Part 1)

    Hey there, Catalyst here for a review! This was, in my opinion, an amazing piece. And I think a lot of that is owed to how well I can relate ...

    Mar 10, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Fantasy
    Re: Melodic Spirits - Chapter one: Hole in my soul

    Hey there, Catalyst here for a quick review! This is a pretty fantastic piece, immediately hooking me in with the description of music. I quite like the character you've described. ...

    Feb 19, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: New Haven: Chapter 2: The Train of Memories

    Hey there, I'm here to poorly critique and awkwardly dispense praise! Enjoy! Firstly, I'd like to say that I greatly enjoyed it. The charm of simplistic pleasures in life, and ...

    Dec 4, 2015

  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Train

    Hey there, I quite enjoyed this short little piece- I pondered it for a time, and I have some thoughts I'd like to share about it barring the initial nitpicking ...

    Dec 3, 2015

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General
    Re: 20 Minutes

    Hey there! I greatly enjoyed reading this grim and clever short. So, now that the time paradoxes have stopped melting my brain, it's time for a review! First of all, ...

    Dec 3, 2015

  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Neverland's Child

    Hey there! After reading this story, I can say that it's a fantastic piece of work. Your descriptions are sound, your dialogue is well done, and most of all, you ...

    Oct 6, 2015


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