CastlesInTheSky

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY :D Chapter 6 is out!!!!! :elephant: “Nigel,” he looked up at me but my façade didn’t falter. Good word choice but the use of t

It was mid-night. No hyphon (-) in midnight. A boat was appraoching the shore of a river. Approaching is spelt "approaching". Thick canopy forests grew on either sides of the ...

Hey, aestar! To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead. Good opening quote! Sometimes quotes at the start of the story ...

The poem was captivating. I must admit it was the first line that pulled me in. One tip though - Use the enter button. :wink: Stops less people from straining ...

Okay people, chapter five!!!! I've noticed I'm kind of getting a following here with this story. I'm getting kind of nervous about disappointing...god I hope every one likes this...!!!! Here ...

Hi! I'm Sarah and I'll be your reviewer for today. Looks promising :D Walking down a lane, The incessant rain shrouds me. This is an excellent first couple of lines. ...

I would say that this is quite a good poem, but i didnt get the meaning very much. Try forming a clearer 'image' next time so it can give the ...

“What started out as a sweet young artist on the rise, turned into the pill poppin,’ booze drinkin,’ party animal we see today as Samantha Dunn. We all loved her ...

I wrote the second part to see if this is really going somewhere. If it just sounds dumb, please tell me. Seriously, it would be great if I didn't waste ...

Nothing out of the ordinary ever happens in Seekonk, Massachusetts. This could be a great introductory sentence or not, based on the audience. I think it's a sliiightly bit cliched, ...

A small part of me wanted to shut my eyes, run past the doors up to my room and pull the covers over my head. A very small part of ...

Hey! One tip - use the enter button a lot! it will mean more people reviewing. Quote: Reading was a new habit I had picked up from my cousin Vannessa. ...

The big tour bus pulled up out side of the Honda Centre in Los Angeles California. Outside is one word. Oh, and 'big' is a very weak adjective. You can ...

Once again, I wrote this about a year ago and began to rewrite and edit it some time ago. My spelling and grammar is really bad. Just a warning. Enjoy. ...

Enjoy. Chapter Three I started noticing a pattern. Every time some one said my name, there would be a random breeze. My father started to notice the draft too, but ...