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Re: Only a dream
This was wonderful!! You should really write more! It was great! I loved it!! You're an excellent writer!!! It was very interesting and fun to read. Please write more pieces ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You
This was a good little story that basically describes love :) It was really good. I think you should try writing a novel or something like that hahaha you know ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: First Date
This was cute! A very entertaining short storie! I have a few nitpicks though. Ok... 1)The ending was cute but it didn't end very well I'm sorry to say, I ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Once Bitten *once edited!*
Hi ^^. I really liked this it was really interesting. I love almost anything that has to deal with vampires :) I absolutely agree with the other reviewers. (And yes, ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH
Wow. I really liked this story. Got me thinking...... well did it really happen?? (Please excuse me for being a bit dumb!) I think it was so deep and it ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: I Won't Let Go
Fluid surrounds me. It’s very dark where I dwell, and right now I am whipping through the fallopian tube to find my new apartment in the county uterus. I use ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Taboo [17]
Okay first off, sorry Im not good at quoting!! I'll try my hardest! Chapter Seventeen (Liliah) “I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
I was going to click the 'submit' button on the tab. I couldn't find it. I realised it was hidden under a serious amount of 'unuse dust'. *coughs* Yes, it's ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Comatose - Prologue
Hi everyone, I'm Lindsey. I found this piece a while back and thought I'd continue with the plot line its supposed to be on. I know it's messy and probably ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: My Soul To Take
I think I know, And I think they're right. I think my soul has taken flight. I think I love him, I'ts been a year, I'm wondering why I'm still ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1.
Chapter 1 Quinn “Don’t be nervous, honey. Everything will be fine.” My mom said soothingly. “I know, Mom. I’m not nervous. I just…I just don’t really know what to expect.” ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: My Life on the Inside
Hey so i'm a newbie and this is my first story. I'm sorry my grammer is so bad i need a lot of help in that area. So please be ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Sadly, It's Life (Chapter One)
Mkay, so first chapter of a story i'm writing. The romance will come in most likely during the second or third chapter so keep on reading. The fist chapter is ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Letters To Cody - 1
I liked this, you gave an overall view of the characters. Kinda. My questions are: What does she look like? What is her name? What does Cody look like? How ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [2]
I thought that the story was really good and I enjoyed both of the chapters. I hope you post more soon. Good job! There were a few problems but everyone ...
Oct 23, 2010
