CarolineB17

Hi there!!! I just want to begin by saying that I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. It is well written and very descriptive. Ok so this is what I felt while ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS!!! Your poem is good, and I liked but there are a few things I wish to point out. First off, let me just say ...

I am speechless...this is so beautiful, so well written and well put!! You are an amazing writer, I felt a connection with your poem, and that's what writing is all ...

What a great poem!! Everything you said is so true, I really love how you said that everyone should be viewed as kings, queens, and royalty. Because everyone is unique ...

I LOVE IT!!! I'm really glad you made some of it rhyme! And I agree, I like this version a lot better!! Oh, I don't know if you would be ...

I like the feelings of sadness and despair in this poem, but I sense a lot pain, which makes me curious as to the inspiration behind this poem. I'm usually ...

I really like the eerie tone this poem has, it's very somber, almost scary. I'm actually very curious as to the real-life events that inspired you to write this. I ...

I'm so moved by this poem of yours, I really like the way you describe darkness. It's s mysterious, so powerful, so. . . beautiful. Darkness indeed is a mysterious ...

Hey there!! This is such a moving poem! And so inspiring! I really like the way you described everything so simple, yet it's more. It's difficult to describe the feelings ...

Hello there mate!! I like your lovely little poem. It's really cute and sweet, and very descriptive. However, I am a bit confused at the end when it says ," ...

This was a cute poem. I didn't exactly see the point of the poem, but it was cute all the same. I don't understand the whole thing you are talking ...

Although, I believe that the happiness in which you speak is completely unrealistic and such, I believe that that the fact that you did this in 5 minutes, and have ...

Hi there again, I was just scrolling through the poems and at random chose this one. it looked good, then I realized it was from the same person I had ...

I really like your poem, I think it describes very well, how girls feel when they are away from that "someone special". I mean I know feel that way whenever ...

Wow, I mean. . . Omg I'm just so blown away by this, it's so captivating, it draws me in. Silence indeed is a powerful thing, and gossip spread by ...